See this example (sorry, private wiki).
I think I like having a description of what was changed, such as "Template parameters changed: link changed from A to B, title changed from C to D..." etc, but longer text makes it too difficult to actually figure out what changed.
See the long description field, "Description changed from Many of you...[many lines later] link. to Join our speaker..." There's no visual distinction, it's all grey text, so "from" and "to" don't stand out.
You probably may use quotes, bold, italics, and more to fix this.