Hi @KStoller-WMF - the praise draft copy is also updated and ready for your review and updates, thanks!

@Urbanecm_WMF I added QQQ descriptions and finalized copy for Personalized praise.

I know that some designs are still in flight, so it's possible some strings are missing. Just let me know if I'm missing anything. I'm also totally willing to discuss any of these strings / decisions further, so feel free to surface any concerns you have or improvements you want to suggest. Thanks!

Change 908357 had a related patch set uploaded (by Urbanecm; author: Urbanecm):

[mediawiki/extensions/GrowthExperiments@master] [WIP] Personalized praise: Finalize i18n messages

https://gerrit.wikimedia.org/r/908357

Change 908357 merged by jenkins-bot:

[mediawiki/extensions/GrowthExperiments@master] Personalized praise: Finalize i18n messages

https://gerrit.wikimedia.org/r/908357

@KStoller-WMF, @RHo for review -

Positive messages from experienced users and mentors increases editor retention. Note: the incorrect form of increases is corrected to increase {F37024911}	✅
Metric: $1 edits, $2 reverts, in $3 hours. Customise these figures in settings.	✅
Send praise	✅
$1 of $2 praise-worthy mentees	✅
More information	Text associated with the info icon on the Send praise module on the Mentor Dashboard
"Send your mentee an encouraging message on their Talk page. Newcomer’s editing activity often increases when they receive thanks or other positive messages about their work from an experienced editor or mentor. You may personalise your default message in settings."	Informational text for the "Send praise" module on the Mentor Dashboard
Send praise	✅
Praise-worthy mentees will be shown here.	✅
Settings	✅
Save	✅
Praise-worthy mentees metric	✅
Edits within a time frame	✅
Your default message	✅
Subject	Placeholder text in the subject field for a message. Text associated with the "Send praise" Mentor dashboard module settings.
Write a personalised message that can either be praise, feedback or encouragement to your mentee. Eg. Thank you for...	Placeholder text in the message textarea for a message from mentor to mentee. Text associated with the "Send praise" Mentor dashboard module settings.

• The two placeholder messages are not in place. Praise Module Copy has a comment that this message "Write a personalised message that can either be praise, feedback..." is not needed anymore. Is it also true for the Subject placeholder message?
• Reverts are not present in metric nor in the Settings.
• [minor] Under the Praise module, there is Setting module for setting a mentor's activity load. Since the Setting dialog for Praise is under the gear (setting) icon, it might be confusing for users to know which Setting to use.

Notifications	✅
You will be notified when a mentee has been displayed for praise.	✅
You have mentees that are praiseworthy!	✅
Send encouragement to mentees via your Mentor dashboard	✅
View Mentor dashboard	✅

Examples of notifications and a post on a mentee's user page:

The messages below haven't been checked yet. Will update soon.

Hi @Etonkovidova the last two messages that still need to be checked were out of date, I've updated the spreadsheet with the updated copy!

@Etonkovidova - thank you so much for the thorough review!

In T326961#8812502, @Etonkovidova wrote:

The two placeholder messages are not in place. Praise Module Copy has a comment that this message "Write a personalised message that can either be praise, feedback..." is not needed anymore. Is it also true for the Subject placeholder message?

@Urbanecm_WMF I know you mentioned this. Correct me if I'm wrong, but the thinking was that the placeholder text isn't really necessary since a default message should always show based on community defaults set in community configuration.

Reverts are not present in metric nor in the Settings.

Correct. We hope to add revert metrics as a follow-up task: T333036: Positive Reinforcement: Personalized praise design improvements for revert data

[minor] Under the Praise module, there is Setting module for setting a mentor's activity load. Since the Setting dialog for Praise is under the gear (setting) icon, it might be confusing for users to know which Setting to use.

I know this was discussed during the design phase when we were trying to decide if Personalize praise settings should be part of the main settings or connected to the module. I agree that it might be confusing for some users, but as this module is only shown to advanced editors, who will know where to ask for help, I think the current layout is likely OK. If we start to receive questions or feedback from Mentors about this, then we can reconsider.