Improve wording of first CTA tipsy
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	• KHammerstein
	May 14 2015, 6:22 PM

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Current text
"Add [page] to a collection of pages you can share with the world!"
No thanks / Add to Collection

This may be confusing, could be more clear about the purpose of making a collection.

Change to:
"Add [[page]] to a collection, a list of pages that you can bookmark or share!"
No thanks / Start a Collection

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	Subject	Repo	Branch	Lines +/-
	i18n: Fix wording of Gather CTA tipsy	mediawiki/extensions/Gather	master	+2 -2

Customize query in gerrit

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Mentioned In: rEGAT7ebbdf92c6e0: i18n: Fix wording of Gather CTA tipsy
rMEXTc76699ad7b1b: Updated mediawiki/extensions Project: mediawiki/extensions/Gather…

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Kaity please let us known when text has been finalised. Proposal seems suitable to me..

Jdlrobson assigned this task to • KHammerstein.May 25 2015, 9:22 PM

Jdlrobson moved this task from Needs triage to Product triage on the Gather board.

@KHammerstein, I do like "start" instead of "add to", but rest of text might be too long for smaller screens. Can you shorten?

@JKatzWMF
"Add [[article]] to a collection, a list of articles that you can bookmark or share!"

How does that sound?
I updated the mock above, less height now.

article->page (always be careful with the world article for translation purposes! :))

• JKatzWMF moved this task from Product triage to Must haves on the Gather board.May 28 2015, 5:49 PM

@KHammerstein, looks good to me.
Since we don't have a strong reason to believe one is better than the other, lets be careful to release this on it's own in order to see if it has an impact on collection numbers:

"Add [[pages]] to a collection, a list of pages that you can bookmark or share!"
vs.
"Add [page] to a collection of pages you can share with the world!"

• JKatzWMF updated the task description. (Show Details)May 28 2015, 10:20 PM

@Jdlrobson, thanks for reminder--updated task description with latest wording.

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