review Manprit's email and provide feedback.
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left comments in the file. the rest looks good to me.
@DarTar I assigned this to you since I've already left feedback on that doc.
@leila Please communicate to Manprit that she can go ahead
@ggellerman I've already submitted my comments to Manprit. I /think/ Dario is next but he should confirm this.
@DarTar, the task can be closed. Manprit sent an email to wmfall list on June 16 about it. No further review is needed.