Been talking to GCI students on IRC who ask for help to understand parts, and everybody sharing that they get very confused. Too much noise, no clear steps plus annoying random notes inbetween that are just irrelevant, no clear structure of steps, repetitions, inconsistent language and examples, needless screenshots etc etc etc.
I've already spent a few hours on this at https://www.mediawiki.org/w/index.php?title=Gerrit/Tutorial&action=history and I'm going to spend more several hours on it and probably end up with hundreds of edits (if this was only a git repo and not a wiki, sigh), hence creating this task for transparency.