The original message is
> $2 removed $1 from mentorship
I looks like this:
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Suggested improvements:
> $1 quit mentorship
> $1 retired from mentorship
Reason :
I don't think newcomers care much about the reason why their mentor is not their mentor anymore. The important thing is that they still have a mentor. :)
Saying that the mentor was removed is true, but it could also be complicated to grasp for some people: "Was my mentor a bad person?"
I think it is better to have one story: they retire. In the same way some parents tell their 5-year-old that their goldfish is now swimming in the great sea and won't return to the fishbowl... Not true, but almost true. ;)
I would even improve the design of the messages, by inverting the two sentences:
- Top, [[ https://translatewiki.net/wiki/MediaWiki:Growthexperiments-quit-mentorship-reassign-mentees-log-message-removed/en | secondary ]]: $1 retired from mentorship
- [[ https://translatewiki.net/wiki/MediaWiki:Growthexperiments-notification-header-mentor-change/en| primary ]]: $2 is your new mentor (bonus: add "on $wiki")
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