The original message is
$2 removed $1 from mentorship
I looks like this:
Reason :
I don't think newcomers care much about the reason why their mentor is not their mentor anymore. The important thing is that they still have a mentor. :)
Saying that the mentor was removed is true, but it could also be complicated to grasp for some people: "Was my mentor a bad person?"
I think it is better to have one story: they retire. In the same way some parents tell their 5-year-old that their goldfish is now swimming in the great sea and won't return to the fishbowl... Not true, but almost true. ;)
See also T327493: Message received by the newcomer when their mentor quits could be improved
Acceptance Criteria:
Update the Growthexperiments-quit-mentorship-reassign-mentees-log-message-removed message to:
Your former mentor, $old_mentor, is no longer mentoring editors.
$new_mentor is your new mentor on $wiki.
or
$new_mentor is your new mentor on $wiki.
Your former mentor, $old_mentor, is no longer mentoring editors.